Wednesday, 15 May 2013

Persuasive language features: Jacob

Punishment in schools was unfair in 1900.

How would you like to be strapped/caned on the hand?
Remember getting caned, remember the dunce cap.
We are hard working students who make sure our work is finished to a high standard.
If I get caned one more time I will go to the jungle and live with monkey's.
99% of children hate punishments from 1900.
Punishments are hurtful, dangerous and unforgettable.

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